Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Everneath by Brodi Ashton



Last spring, Nikki Beckett vanished, sucked into an underworld known as the Everneath, where immortals Feed on the emotions of despairing humans. Now she's returned- to her old life, her family, her friends- before being banished back to the underworld... this time forever. She has six months before the Everneath comes to claim her, six months for good-byes she can't find the words for, six months to find redemption, if it exists. Nikki longs to spend these months reconnecting with her boyfriend, Jack, the one person she loves more than anything. But there's a problem: Cole, the smoldering immortal who first enticed her to the Everneath, has followed Nikki to the mortal world. And he'll do whatever it takes to bring her back- this time as his queen. As Nikki's time grows short and her relationships begin slipping from her grasp, she's forced to make the hardest decision of her life: find a way to cheat fate and remain on the Surface with Jack or return to the Everneath and become Cole's...
Alright, I admit it; I was partially swayed to request Everneath by Brodi Ashton because of the cover. I'm easily seduced by beautiful red dresses. Not to mention the alluring premise of a young adult retelling of the Persephone myth which involves a race of Immortals draining emotions from humans. From several passages in the book, I could tell that Ashton knew the many facets of this myth well, as evidenced by the light exploration of some intriguing interpretations of Persephone's and Hades' roles. I also particularly liked how Ashton subtly revealed an interconnecting theme of Orpheus and Eurydice.

Another compelling aspect of Everneath is Nikki's time in the titular underworld. Unfortunately, the novel spends very little time recounting her experience there. In fact what could have made Everneath haunting and unforgettable - the mythical themes - are underutilized. The writing showed some glimmer of beautiful lyricism here and there but was mostly average and typical young adult telling not showing.

None of the characters resonated with me. For someone who had spent a hundred years asleep in the underworld, Nikki doesn't seem scarred enough, traumatized enough. She has only six months left to live above and spends most of that time doing ordinary, mundane things like homework. She's supposed to have survived intact because of her love for Jack but she wastes months avoiding him. Nikki and Jack's tepid relationship has none of the grandeur of the tragic romance of Orpheus and Eurydice. Cole, as the teenage Hades, is probably the most interesting, yet even this bad boy is one dimensional.

"'I want what Hades and Persephone had, and I can't do it without you. The only time the queen of the Everneath had been overthrown is when and Everliving has found his perfect match. I've spent my whole life--and it's a long one, trust me---looking for my perfect match, and it's you. I knew you were different from the first moment I met you. The first moment you placed your hands in mine.'" 

17 comments:

  1. Lol, I confess that I too can be swayed by flowing red dresses, not to mention Persephone myths :D

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    1. And the red dress, you'd be surprised to know I'm sure, has absolutely nothing to do with the story. Go figure.

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  2. OK, so I know this has nothing to do with your review but your mention of red dresses made me think about Jenny Lawson's traveling red dress, and if you haven't heard about it you must check it out here because it's really awesome and you should totally get in on it.
    As for the book, I really haven't heard anyone else say anything good about it either so it's not going to be going on my reading list.

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    1. Oh my goodness, Simcha! I think I've found my new goddess! "Find your red dress. And wear the hell out of it." Those are words to live by. I think I will wear a spectacularly decadent ruby red dress this weekend and, I don't know, take the garbage out, go grocery shopping, whatever with it. Because I don't give a fig what anyone thinks!

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    2. Since some of the red dress lenders are willing to send their dresses internationally I'm tempted to request one to be sent to me. I'd love to see what kind of look I'd get wearing a red ball gown while walking my son to kindergarten.

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  3. I took her bland outlook and personality due to the fact of the feed. She was stripped of everything that made her "her" and so had to relearn. She even had to relearn her love for Jack since everything but the pull toward him was gone. I do agree that Cole was 1D but I was glad of that... I still enjoyed Jack. ;)

    Sorry you didn't enjoy it, but I really did enjoy seeing your take on the book I liked.

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    1. Everneath wasn't for me but I can see how others could enjoy it. The ending elevated the rest of the story for me, I admit, but I wish the entire book had the same depth.

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  4. Homework? Like seriously, she only has 6 months and she does...homework! LOL

    I'll admit, the cover is pretty seductive and the mythology it's build off is fascinating, but I try to avoid telling instead of showing as much as possible.

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    1. With 6 months to live above ground, I'd kidnap Jack the hottie and "re-acquaint" myself with him, I'd eat chocolate croissants every day, I'd ride dirt bikes, tell off everybody that's ever been mean to me --- the list is endless. But it would definitely not involve school or homework!

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    2. Ditto! Especially the kidnap a hottie bit. ;)

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  5. Thanks for your honest review. I'm also swayed by pretty covers and red dresses.

    I almost added this to my debut author challenge list, but most of the books I chose were realistic-contemporary. I'm scaling back a bit on speculative fiction, although I'm still reading it and I still may read this book.

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    1. I really should read more contemporary books, YA included. I've got a glut of paranormal ones as it is.

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  6. Oooo, I like the sounds of this one! Wonderful review. I wasn't so sure with this one where it would go. And I like what you have said here. :) Thank you!!

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    1. I would never want to dissuade anyone from reading a book they're truly interested in; if you do end up trying it, I hope you like it!

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  7. I think this shall not be for me either. I think I'm done with YA unless there is another that is so good out there that it would blow my socks off.

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  8. Oh, another great cover hiding an average story *sigh*
    I liked the sound of it, but now I have my doubts. I guess I will wait for a while before deciding if to read it or not. Too bad it did't work for you.
    Happy midnight reading!

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  9. I can certainly see why you requested it. The cover is beautiful.

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